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__My Name__: Kitty Lam

__Presentation Date__: Tuesday, January 12, 2010; D block, Day 1

__My Mentor__: Mrs. Kristin Ward

__Subjects and Sub-topics:__ eating, disorder, affect, someone

__Thesis Question:__ How does an eating disorder affect someone?

__Thesis Sentence:__ Eating disorders affect people.

__Statements:__ Society protrays ideal body image unrealistically, which leads to the development of eating disorders society has a responsibility, through educational programs, to help prevent the development of eating disorders.

__Premise(s):__ society protrays ideal body image unrealistically An unrealistic ideal body image lead to the development of eating disorders.

__Conclusion:__ society has a responsibility, through educational programs, to help prevent the development of eating disorders.

__Thesis sentence__: Since society protrays the ideal body image unrealistically, leading to the development of eating disorders, accordingly, society has a responsibility to help prevent the development of eating disorders through educational programs.